Hope,
I really like the start to your essay but I was hoping to see more. Your outline really helped me figure out what you will be writing about. My one question is: How? How does Facebook ruin relationships? How has it ruined society and personal interaction? I’m assuming these questions will be answered as you get more into the paper, but it’s just something to think about.
Zach,
I think this is a really good start to this paper. You’re about halfway done and I’m pretty impressed with that because most people have written about two pages. Anyways, I really like your topic. I think it’s really interesting because most college students are not smart when it comes to sharing their private information on the internet. I feel that I’m smart about it because instead of sharing my full name on Facebook I only share my first and middle name and I don’t put my home address or phone number like a lot of people do. I’d really love to hear what can be done to keep users safe while online, and even what can be done to make users not share as much information as they do now.
John A,
I think this is a really good start to the paper and the topic is definitely an interesting one, but I feel it’s very common. We all multitask, on and off the computer. I like that you talk about the affect of multitasking on our school and job work, but I feel like something is missing. I don’t know if anyone else in the class will agree with me but I think the paper needs something more but I’m not sure what.
